Analysis of A message



You are in the beautiful moon light
i will try to reach you with all my might.
My life is like a non stop dream
and you look sweeter than coconut ice-cream.
This is a message to you
but i haven't got a clue
if loving you is real
or is it one of my sweet dreams.
Trying to explain how i feel inside
emotions so strong cannot hide...
i am writing a message for you to show... that i will love you now and forever more.


Scheme AABBCCDEFFG
Poetic Form
Metre 110010011 1111111111 11110111 0111011011 1101011 1110101 110111 11111111 1010111101 01011101 1110010111111111100101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 417
Words 87
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 318
Words per stanza (avg) 87
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Submitted by dean on September 16, 2014

Modified on March 14, 2023

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