Analysis of To an angry sister



Sister, my sister
Why is it that you speak so loud?
Is it your way to be noticed?
Or your way to make yourself count?
Tell me sister, who will listen?
Who will see?
The words coming out of your mouth
are only those of hatred and bitterness
turning the beautiful sight of you into an ugly one
Why my sister
Is it that you don’t care?
Is it your arrogance
That you appearently seem to think is fine?
Is it your ignorance
Which is obvious when you say those stupid things
Or is it just you being self-centered
Thinking that’s what the worlds looking for?
No, my lovely sister
Is that really all there’s to know about you?
Is that all you have to give?
I know better
You know better and guess what
The world knows better
So lift yourself up sister
And finally be proud of the queen you truely are!

(Amsterdam,26 august 2007)


Scheme AXBXCXXXCAXDXDXXXAXXAXAAX B
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 11111111 11111110 11111011 11101110 111 01101111 11011100100 100100111011101 1110 111111 111100 11111111 111100 111001111101 1111110110 101101101 111010 11101111011 1111111 1110 1110011 01110 1101110 010011101111 1010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 821
Words 160
Sentences 12
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 25, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 322
Words per stanza (avg) 79
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 21, 2023

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