Analysis of A Poem for Lucky



A world that's mourning
A heaven filled with laughter
A soldier has fallen
An angel called home

A 'lucky' shot was taken
A car was the price
A car worth the life of a man
A man that was worthy of life

Lucky is now gone
He's no longer a slave
No longer a prisoner of this world
that still can't behave

Maybe one day he'll look down with a smile
Knowing we're still marching on his songs
When his 'different colors, one people'has finally brought us all
'together as one'


Scheme XXAX AXXX XBXB XXXA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 01110 0101110 010110 11011 0101110 01101 01101101 01111011 10111 111001 1100100111 11101 1011111101 101110111 11100101101100111 01011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 477
Words 93
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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