Analysis of You May Have Obtained Nama



You may have obtained nama, but without Rama
Your title of Vaishnava is barren like a cradle in a childless home
Or a marriage procession without groom!

Lord resides within you, but you couldn't discern him;
You wander aimlessly thinking him to be afar;
You calculate about the One beyond the calculations;
You limit the Illimitable
And in this state of twoness, you count your futile beads!
You may have obtained nama, but without Rama
Your title of Vaishnava is barren like a cradle in a childless home
Or a marriage procession without groom!

You try to be Harijan without having Hari!
How can pangs of hunger subside by a bash of hollow words?
How can throes of separation subside by mere donning of ascetic clothes?
It is like the futile roaring of rainless clouds!
You may have obtainednama, but without Rama
Your title of Vaishnava is barren like a cradle in a childless home
Or a marriage procession without groom!

You think you have become harijan by merely singing lord's praises,
You try to rival a swan, when your deeds are those of a crow!
The lord will indeed disregard you!
You may have obtainednama, but without Rama
Your title of Vaishnava is barren like a cradle in a childless home
Or a marriage procession without groom!

Says Narsinh, only he is worth our obeisance,
Whose mind has dissolved into the formless;
In whom the delusion of the world of differences is shattered
And in whom the flame of renunciation is resplendent.
You may have obtained nama, but without Rama
Your title of Vaishnava is like a cradle in a childless home
Or a marriage procession without the groom!


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Poetic Form
Metre 11101110110 11011110101000101 1010010011 1010111110011 1101001011101 1100101010010 11001 001111111101 11101110110 11011110101000101 1010010011 11111011010 111110011011101 111101001111010101 11101010111 111110110 11011110101000101 1010010011 111101111010110 111100111111101 01101011 111110110 11011110101000101 1010010011 1110111101 111010101 01001010111000110 00101100101010 11101110110 110111101000101 10100100101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,589
Words 282
Sentences 14
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 8, 7, 6, 7
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 257
Words per stanza (avg) 56
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Narsinh Mehta

Narsinh Mehta, also known as Narsi Mehta or Narsi Bhagat , was a 15th-century poet-saint of Gujarat, India, notable as a bhakta, an exponent of Vaishnava poetry. He is especially revered in Gujarati literature, where he is acclaimed as its Adi Kavi (Sanskrit for "first among poets"). His bhajan Vaishnav Jan To was Mahatma Gandhi's favourite and has become synonymous with him.  more…

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