Analysis of The Steed Of Mind Speedeth Over The Sky

Lalleshwari 1320 (Kashmir) – 1392



The steed of mind speedeth over the sky,
And, in the twinkling of the eye,
A hundred thousand leagues traverseth he.
Yet a man of discrimination can control
the curvetting steed,
And, on the wheels of praana and apraana, guide
his chariot aright.


Scheme AABCDED
Poetic Form
Metre 011111001 000100101 01010111 10110010101 011 010111011 11001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 254
Words 45
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 196
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 11, 2023

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Lalleshwari

Lalleshwari was a mystic of the Kashmiri Shaivite sect. She was a creator of the mystic poetry called vatsun or Vakhs, literally "speech". Known as Lal Vakhs, her verses are the earliest compositions in the Kashmiri language and are an important part in history of Kashmiri literature. She inspired some of the later Sufis of Kashmir. She is also known by various other names, including Lal Ded, Lalla, Lal Diddi, Laleshwari, Lalla Yogishwari and Lalishri. more…

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