Analysis of Let Us All Offer Thanksgiving (FREEDOM)

Ghulam Ahmad Mahjoor 1887 (village of Mitrigam, Pulwama) – 1952 ( Kashmir Valley)



Let us all offer thanksgiving,
For Freedom has come to us;
It's after ages that she has beamed
Her radiance on us.

In western climes Freedom comes
With a shower of light and grace,
But dry, sterile thunder is all
She has for our own soil.

Poverty and starvation,
Repression and lawlessness, -
It's with these happy blessings
That she has come to us.

Freedom, being of heavenly birth,
Can't move from door to door;
You'll find her camping in the homes
Of a chosen few alone.

She says she will not tolerate
Any wealth in private hands;
That's why they are wringing capital
Out of the hands of everyone.

There's mourning in every house
But in sequestered bowers
Our rulers, like bridegrooms,
Are in Alliance win Freedom.

Nabir Sheikh knows what Freedom means,
For his wife was whisked away.
He went on complaining until
She bore Freedom in a new home !

They searched her armpits seven times
To see if she was hiding rice;
In a basket covered with a shawl
The peasant's wife brought Freedom home.

There's restlessness in every heart,
But no one dare speak out -
Afraid that with their free expression
Freedom may be annoyed.

[Translated by: Triloki Nath Raina]


Scheme XAXA XXBX CAXA XXXX XXXC XXAX XXXD XXBD XXCX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010 1101111 110101111 010011 0101101 10101101 11101011 1111011 1000010 0100100 1111010 111111 101011001 111111 11010001 1010101 1111110 1010101 111110100 1101110 11001001 1001010 101011 10010110 1111101 1111101 11101001 11100011 1101101 11111101 001010101 0111101 110001001 111111 011111010 101101 01011110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,136
Words 207
Sentences 11
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ghulam Ahmad Mahjoor

Peerzada Ghulam Ahmad (August 1887 − 9 April 1952), known by his pen name as Mahjoor, was a poet of the Kashmir Valley, along with contemporaries, Zinda Kaul, Abdul Ahad Azad, and Dinanath Nadim.[2][3][4] He is especially noted for introducing a new style into Kashmiri poetry and for expanding Kashmiri poetry into previously unexplored thematic realms.[5] In addition to his poems in Kashmiri, Mahjoor is also noted for his poetic compositions in Persian and Urdu. more…

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