Analysis of In Death Valley

Edwin Markham 1852 (Oregon City) – 1940



There came gray stretches of volcanic plains,
Bare, lone and treeless, then a bleak lone hill
Like to the dolorous hill that Dobell saw.
Around were heaps of ruins piled between
The Burn o’ Sorrow and the Water o’ Care;
And from the stillness of the down-crushed walls
One pillar rose up dark against the moon.
There was a nameless Presence everywhere;
In the gray soil there was a purple stain,
And the gray reticent rocks were dyed with blood—
Blood of a vast unknown Calamity.
It was the mark of some ancestral grief—
Grief that began before the ancient Flood.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 579
Words 103
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 448
Words per stanza (avg) 101
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Edwin Markham

Lieutenant General Sir Edwin Markham KCB was a British Army officer who became Lieutenant Governor of Jersey. more…

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