Analysis of Proletaria



THE SUNNY rounds of Earth contain   
 An obverse to its Day,   
Our fertile Vagrancy’s domain,   
 Wan Proletaria.   

From pole to pole of Poverty           
 We stumble through the years,   
With hazy-lanterned Memory   
 And Hope that never nears.   

Wherever Plenty’s crop invites   
 Our pitiful brigades,           
Lurk cannoneers of Vested Rights,   
 Juristic ambuscades;   

And here hangs Rent, that squalid cage   
 Within which Mammon thrusts,   
Bound with the fetter of a wage,           
 The helots of his lusts.   

With palsied Doubt as guide, we wind   
 Among the lanes of Need,   
Where meagre Hungers scouting find   
 But slavered baits of Greed.           

The wet-lipped Lamias of Caste,   
 Awaiting our advance,   
Our choicest squadrons’ fealty blast   
 With magic smile and glance:   

Delilah-limbed temptations flit           
 Among our drowsy rows,   
And on our willing captains fit   
 The badges of our foes.   

What wonder sometimes if in stealth   
 Our starker outposts wait,           
And, in the prowling eyes of Wealth,   
 Dash vitriol of Hate;   

Or if our Samsons, ere too late,   
 Their treasons should make good   
By whelming in the temple’s fate           
 Their viper owners’ brood!   

Our polyandrous dam has borne   
 To Satan and to God   
The hordes of Night, the clans of Morn,   
 That through our valleys plod.           

Ah, motherhood of misery   
 For Christ-child as for pest!   
The greater her fertility   
 The drier grows her breast!   

Too many linger on the track;           
 A few outstrip the time:   
Some, God has tattooed yellow, black,   
 And some disguised with crime.   

Art’s living archives here abound,   
 Carraras of Despair,           
And those weird masks of Sight and Sound   
 The Tragic Muses wear.   

Tho’ blind and dull, ’tis we supply   
 The Painter’s dazzling dreams;   
The rolling flood of Poetry           
 From our dumb chaos streams.   

Nay, when your world is over-tired,   
 And Genius comatose,   
Our race, by Nemesis inspired,   
 Old Order overthrows:           

With earthquake-life we thrill your land,   
 Refill the cruse of Art,   
Revitalize spent Wisdom, and—   
 Resume our weary part.   

The palace of successful Guilt           
 Is mortared with our shame;   
On hecatombs of Us are built   
 The soaring towers of Fame.   

We are the gnomes of Titan works   
 Whose throbbings never cease;           
Our unregarded signet lurks   
 On every masterpiece.   

The floating isles, that shuttling tie   
 All peoples into one   
By adept steermen’s sorcery           
 Of magnet, steam, and sun;   

Religion’s dolmens, Sphinxes, spires,   
 Her Biblic armouries;   
The helot lightning of the wires   
 That mesh your lands and seas;           

The viaducts ’tween Near and Far,   
 Whereon, o’er range and mead,   
Bacchantic Trade’s triumphant car   
 And iron tigers speed;   

The modern steely crops that rise           
 Where technic Jasons sow:   
—All these but feebly symbolize   
 The largesse we bestow.   

And our reward? In this wan land,   
 In clientage of Greed,         
Despised, polluted, maimed and banned,   
 To wander and—to breed


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Poetic Form Quatrain  (78%)
Metre 01011101 101111 1010101 11 11111100 110101 1101100 011101 0101101 1010001 111101 11 01111101 01111 11010101 010111 1111111 010111 111101 11111 011111 0101001 1010101001 110101 01010101 0110101 011010101 0101101 11001101 101011 00010111 110011 11101111 11111 1100101 110101 1010111 110011 01110111 1110101 1101100 111111 01000100 010101 11010101 010101 11101101 010111 1101101 1101 01111101 010101 11011101 0101001 01011100 1101101 111111010 01010 1011100010 11010 1111111 100111 0101100 0110101 01010101 111101 111111 0101011 11011101 11101 101101 110010 010111001 110011 1011100 110101 010111 011 010101010 111101 01001101 11101 110101 010101 01010111 11011 1111010 001101 010010111 0111 01010101 110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 3,162
Words 451
Sentences 18
Stanzas 23
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 92
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Bernard O'Dowd

Bernard Patrick O'Dowd was an Australian activist, educator, poet, journalist, and author of several law books and poetry books. O'Dowd worked as an assistant-librarian and later Chief Parliamentary Draughtsman in the Supreme Court at Melbourne for 48 years; he was also a co-publisher and writer for the radical paper Tocsin. Bernard O'Dowd lived to age 87. more…

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