Analysis of Love and Sacrifice



CAN we not consecrate   
 To man and God above   
This volume of our great   
 Supernal tide of love?   

’Twere wrong its wealth to waste           
 On merely me and you,   
In selfish touch and taste,   
 As other lovers do.   

This love is not as theirs:   
 It came from the Divine,           
Whose glory still it wears,   
 And print of Whose design.   

The world is full of woe,   
 The time is blurred with dust,   
Illusions breed and grow,           
 And eyes’ and flesh’s lust.   

The mighty league with Wrong   
 And stint the weakling’s bread;   
The very lords of song   
 With Luxury have wed.           

Fair Art deserts the mass,   
 And loiters with the gay;   
And only gods of brass   
 Are popular to-day.   

Two souls with love inspired,           
 Such lightning love as ours,   
Could spread, if we desired,   
 Dismay among such powers:   

Could social stables purge   
 Of filth where festers strife:           
Through modern baseness surge   
 A holier tide of life.   

Yea, two so steeped in love   
 From such a source, could draw   
The angels from above           
 To lead all to their Law.   

We have no right to seek   
 Repose in rosy bower,   
When Hunger thins the cheek   
 Of childhood every hour:           

Nor while the tiger, Sin,   
 ’Mid youths and maidens roams,   
Should Duty skulk within   
 These selfish cosy homes.   

Our place is in the van           
 With those crusaders, who   
Maintain the rights of man   
 ’Gainst despot and his crew.   

If sacrifice may move   
 Their load of pain from men,           
The greatest right of Love   
 Is to renounce It then.   

Ah, Love, the earth is woe’s   
 And sadly helpers needs:   
And, till its burden goes,           
 Our work is—where it bleeds.


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Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11110 110101 1101101 1111 111111 110101 010101 110101 111111 111001 110111 011101 011111 011111 010101 01011 010111 01011 010111 110011 111001 01101 010111 110011 1111010 1101110 1111010 0101110 110101 11111 11011 0100111 111101 110111 010101 111111 111111 0101010 110101 1110010 110101 110101 110101 110101 1011001 110101 010111 110011 11011 111111 010111 110111 110111 010101 011101 1011111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,749
Words 275
Sentences 13
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 56
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Bernard O'Dowd

Bernard Patrick O'Dowd was an Australian activist, educator, poet, journalist, and author of several law books and poetry books. O'Dowd worked as an assistant-librarian and later Chief Parliamentary Draughtsman in the Supreme Court at Melbourne for 48 years; he was also a co-publisher and writer for the radical paper Tocsin. Bernard O'Dowd lived to age 87. more…

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