Analysis of I love you I hate you



Hum
As his eyes open he sees bright neon lights after passing a giant rainbow
The monoliths emerge and he again reaches the city called Sin city
So many sweet memories in so short a time
Passion, pain, loss, gain.  taxing my dizzied brain.
I love you i hate you

Hum
the noise increases in the cerebellum 2001 a space oddyssey
How to put it into words?  You have to see the movie.
Only the experiential fast forward of this city can cure it.
Otherwise it's there now.  Calling me to come
otherwise my brain goes hummmmmm.

Have you been to Sin city?
Hummmmmmmmmm
Then you know what I mean.
Hummmmmmmmmmm
Multiply your life's pace times ten and then
Fold it over space and back again
I love you I hate you for what you've done

Like a little toy drummer beats over and over incessantly
Like a little toy monkey bangs two cymbals together
I hear the words repeating constantly
Las Vegas Las Vegas Las Vegas
and then Hummmmmmmmmmmm
I love you I hate you

Beau Golden
10-1-2007


Scheme AxbxxC Adbxaa baxaeef bxbdaC fx
Poetic Form
Metre 1 1111011110110100101 010010101100101110 110110001101 1011110111 111111 1 01010001011 11110111111010 10000101101110111 1011110111 101111 1111110 1 111111 1 101111101 111010101 1111111111 10101101100100100 10101101110010 1101010100 110110110 011 111111 110 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 953
Words 181
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 7, 6, 2
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 154
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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