Analysis of If I Were Old

William Henry Ogilvie 1869 (Scotland) – 1963



If I were old, a broken man and blind,
and one should lead me to Mid-Eildon's crest,
and leave me there a little time to rest
sharing the hilltop with the Border wind,
the whispering heather, and the curlew's cry,
I know the blind dark could not be so deep,
so cruel and clinging, but that I
should see the sunlit curve of Cheviot's steep
rise blue and friendly on the distant sky!

There is no darkness - God! there cannot be -
so heavy as to curtain from my sight
the beauty of those Border slopes that lie
far south before me, and a love-found light
would shine upon the slow Tweed loitering by
with gift of song and silver to the sea!-
No dark can ever hide this dear loved land from me


Scheme ABBACDCDC EFCFCEE
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010101 011111111 0111010111 100110101 0100100011 1101111111 110010111 11011111 1101010101 1111011101 1101110111 0101110111 1101100111 11010111001 1111010101 111101111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 682
Words 138
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 7
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 268
Words per stanza (avg) 68
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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William Henry Ogilvie

William Henry Ogilvie was a Scottish-Australian narrative poet and horseman. more…

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