Analysis of When You Are Old

William Ernest Henley 1849 (Gloucester) – 1903 (Woking)



When you are old, and I am passed away –
Passed, and your face, your golden face is gray –
I think, what’er the end, this dream of mine,
Comforting you, a friendly star will shine
Down the dim slope where you still stumble and stray.
So may it be: that so dead yesterday,
Not sad-eyed ghost but generous and gay,
May serve your memories like almighty wine,
When you are old!

Dear Heart, it shall be so. Under the sway
Of death the past’s enormous disarray
Lies hushed and dark. Yet though there come no sign,
Live on well pleased: immortal and divine
Love shall still tend you, as God’s angels may,
When you are old.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111011101 1011110111 111011111 1001010111 10111111001 111111110 1111110001 11110010101 1111 1111111001 110101001 1101111111 1111010001 1111111101 1111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 620
Words 119
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 6
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 237
Words per stanza (avg) 59
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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William Ernest Henley

William Ernest Henley was an English poet, critic and editor, best remembered for his 1875 poem "Invictus". more…

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