Analysis of Hermotimus



'Wilt not lay thee down in quiet slumber?
Weary dost thou seem, and ill at rest;
Sleep will bring thee dreams in starry number-
Let him come to thee and be thy guest.
Midnight now is past-
Husband! come at last-
Lay thy throbbing head upon my breast.'

'Weary am I, but my soul is waking;
Fain I'd lay me gently by thy side,
But my spirit then, its home forsaking,
Through the realms of space would wander wide-
Everything forgot,
What would be thy lot,
If I came not back to thee, my bride?'

'Music, like the lute of young Apollo,
Vibrates even now within mine ear;
Soft and silver voices bid me follow,
Yet my soul is dull and will not hear.
Waking it will stay:
Let me watch till day-
Fainter will they come, and disappear.'

'Speak not thus to me, my own-my dearest!
These are but the phantoms of thy brain;
Nothing can befall thee which thou fearest,
Thou shalt wake to love and life again.
Were this sleep thy last,
I should hold thee fast,
Thou shouldst strive against me but in vain.'

'Eros will protect us, and will hover,
Guardian-like, above thee all the night,
Jealous of thee, as of some fond lover
Chiding back the rosy-fingered light-
He will be thine aid:
Canst thou feel afraid
When
his
torch above us burneth bright?'

'Lo! the cressets of the night are waning-
Old Orion hastens from the sky;
Only thou of all things art remaining
Unrefreshed by slumber-thou and I.
Sound and sense are still;
Even the distant rill
Murmurs fainter now, and languidly.'

'Come and rest thee, husband!'-And no longer
Could the young man that fond call resist:
Vainly was he warned, for love was stronger-
Warmly did he press her to his breast.
Warmly met she his;
Kiss succeeded kiss,
Till their eyelids closed with sleep oppressed.

Soon Aurora left her early pillow,
And the heavens grew rosy-rich, and rare;
Laughed the dewy plain and glassy billow,
For the Golden God himself was there;
And the vapour-screen
Rose the hills between,
Steaming up, like incense, in the air.

O'er her husband sate Ione bending-
Marble-like and marble-hued he lay;
Underneath her raven locks descending,
Paler seemed his face, and ashen gray,
And so white his brow-
White and cold as snow-
'Husband! Gods! his soul hath passed away!'

Raise ye up the pile with gloomy shadow-
Heap it with the mournful cypress-bough!-
And they raised the pile upon the meadow,
And they heaped the mournful cypress too;
And they laid the dead
On his funeral bed,
And they kindled up the flames below.

Swiftly rose they, and the corse surrounded,
Spreading out a pall into the air;
And the sharp and sudden crackling sounded
Mournfully to all the watchers there.
Soon their force was spent,
And the body blent
With the embers' slow-expiring glare.

Night again was come; but oh, how lonely
To the mourner did that night appear!
Peace nor rest it brought, but sorrow only,
Vain repinings and unwonted fear.
Dimly burned the lamp-
Chill the air and damp-
And the winds without were moaning drear.

Hush! a voice in solemn whispers speaking
Breaks within the twilight of the room;
And Ione, loud and wildly shrieking,
Starts and gazes through the ghastly gloom.
Nothing sees she there-
All is empty air,
All is empty as a rifled tomb.

Once again the voice beside her sounded,
Low, and faint, and solemn was its tone-
'Nor by form nor shade am I surrounded,
Fleshly home and dwelling have I none.
They are passed away-
Woe is me! to-day
Hath robbed me of myself, and made me lone.'

'Vainly were the words of parting spoken;
Evermore must Charon turn from me.
Still my thread of life remains unbroken,
And unbroken ever it must be;
Only they may rest
Whom the Fates' behest
From their mortal mansion setteth free.'

'I have seen the robes of Hermes glisten-
Seen him wave afar his serpent-wand;
But to me the Herald would not listen-
When the dead swept by at his command,
Not with that pale crew
Durst I venture too-
Ever shut for me the quiet land.'

'Day and night before the dreary portal,
Phantom-shapes, the guards


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111101010 101110111 1111101010 111110111 1111 10111 111010111 1011111110 111110111 1110111010 101111101 1001 11111 111111111 1010111010 101010111 1010101110 111110111 10111 11111 10111001 1111111110 111010111 101011111 111110101 01111 11111 111011101 1010110110 1001011101 1011111110 101010101 11111 11101 1 1 101111 101101110 101010101 1011111010 1110101 10111 100101 1010101 101110110 101111101 1011111110 101110111 10111 10101 11111101 1010101010 0010110101 1010101010 101010111 0011 10101 101101001 10010101010 101010111 010101010 11110101 01111 10111 101111101 111011101 111010101 011010101 011010101 01101 111001 011010101 1011001010 101010101 0010101010 1110101 11111 00101 101010101 1011111110 101011101 1111111010 11011 10101 10101 001010101 1010101010 10101101 0010101010 101010101 10111 11101 111010101 1010101010 101010111 1111111010 11010111 11101 11111 111110111 1000111010 10110111 1111101010 001010111 10111 10101 11101011 1110111010 111011101 1110101110 101111101 11111 11101 101110101 1010101010 10101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 3,914
Words 740
Sentences 55
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 7, 9, 7, 7, 7, 7, 7, 7, 7, 7, 7, 7, 7, 2
Lines Amount 116
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 182
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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William Edmondstoune Aytoun

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