Analysis of Barcarolle

Arthur William Edgar O'Shaughnessy 1844 (London) – 1881 (London)



The stars are dimly seen among the shadows of the bay,
And lights that win are seen in strife with lights that die away.

The wave is very still -- the rudder loosens in our hand,
The zephyr will not fill our sail and waft us to the land;
O precious is the pause between the winds that come and go,
And sweet the silence of the shores between the ebb and flow.

No sound but sound of rest is on the bosom of the deep,
Soft as the breathing of a breast serenly hushed with sleep:
Lay by the ear; there is a voice at heart to sing or sigh --
O what shall be the choice of barcarolle or lullaby?

Say shall we sing of day or night, fair land or mighty ocean,
Of any rapturous delight or any dear emotion,
Of any joy that is on earth, or hope that is above--
The holy country of our birth, or any song of love?

Our heart in all our life is like the hand of one who steers
A bark upon an ocean rife with dangers and with fears;
The joys, the hopes, like waves or wings, bear up this life of ours --
Short as a song of all these things that make up all its hours.

Spread sail! For it is Hope today that like a wind new-risen
Doth waft us on a golden wing towards a new horizon,
That is the sun before our sight, the beacon for us burning,
That is the star in all our night of watching and of yearning.

Love is this thing that we pursue today, tonight, for ever,
We care not whither, know not who shall be at length the giver:
For Love, -- our life and all our years are cast upon the waves;
Our heart is as the hand that steers; -- but who is He that saves?

We ply with oars, we strive with every sail upon our mast --
We never tire, never fail -- and Love is seen at last:
A low and purple mirage like a coast where day is breaking --
Sink sail! for such a dream of Love is lost before the waking.


Scheme AA BBCC DDEE FFGG HHII FFJJ KKLL MMJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 0111010101101 01111101111101 011101010100101 010111101011101 11010101011101 01010101010101 11111111010101 110101011111 11011101111111 11110111110 111111111111010 110100011101010 11011111111101 010101101110111 1010110111011111 01011101110011 010111111111110 110111111111110 111111011101110 111101010101010 1101011010101110 1101011011100110 111111010101110 111101111111010 1110101101110101 101110111111111 1111111100101101 11010101011111 010100110111110 111101111101010
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,797
Words 374
Sentences 11
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 170
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Arthur William Edgar O'Shaughnessy

Arthur William Edgar O'Shaughnessy was a British poet and herpetologist. Of Irish descent, he was born in London. He is most remembered for his Ode, beginning with the words "We are the music makers, / And we are the dreamers of dreams", which has been set to music by several composers including Edward Elgar as (as The Music Makers), Zoltán Kodály, Alfred Reed and, more recently, Aphex Twin. more…

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