Analysis of In The Downhill Of Life

William Collins 1721 (Chichester) – 1759 (Chichester)



In the downhill of life, when I find I'm declining,
May my lot no less fortunate be
Than a snug elbow-chair can afford for reclining,
And a cot that o'erlooks the wide sea;
With an ambling pad-pony to pace o'er the lawn,
While I carol away idle sorrow,
And blithe as the lark that each day hails the dawn
Look forward with hope for tomorrow.

With a porch at my door, both for shelter and shade too,
As the sunshine or rain may prevail;
And a small spot of ground for the use of the spade too,
With a barn for the use of the flail;
A cow for my dairy, a dog for my game,
And a purse when a friend wants to borrow;
I'll envy no Nabob his riches or fame,
Nor what honours may wait him tomorrow.

From the bleak northern blast may my cot be completely
Secured by a neighbouring hill;
And at night may repose steal upon me more sweetly
By the sound of a murmuring rill;
And while peace and plenty I find at my board,
With a heart free from sickness and sorrow,
With my friends may I share what today may afford,
And let them spread the table tomorrow.

And when I at last must throw off this frail cov'ring
Which I've worn for threescore years and ten,
On the brink of the grave I'll not seek to keep hov'ring,
Nor my thread wish to spin o'er again;
But my face in the glass I'll serenely survey,
And with smiles count each wrinkle and furrow;
As this old worn-out stuff, which is threadbare today,
May become everlasting tomorrow.


Scheme ABABCDCD EFEFGDGD BHBHIDID AJAJKDKD
Poetic Form
Metre 0011111111010 111111001 101111011010 00111011 1110011111001 1110011010 01101111101 11011101 1011111110011 10111101 0011111011011 101101101 01111001111 001101111 11011011011 11111101 1011011111010 011011 0111011011110 101101001 01101011111 1011110010 111111101101 011101001 01111111111 11111101 101101111111 1111111001 1110011010001 0111110010 11111111101 10101001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,401
Words 278
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 276
Words per stanza (avg) 69
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 20, 2023

1:26 min read
129

William Collins

William Ronald Collins was an English cricketer. more…

All William Collins poems | William Collins Books

0 fans

Discuss this William Collins poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "In The Downhill Of Life" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 1 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/39751/in-the-downhill-of-life>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    30
    days
    12
    hours
    48
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who is considered to be the greatest poet of Russia’s golden age?
    A Vladimir Mayakovsky
    B Alexander Pushkin
    C Leo Tolstoy
    D Charles Baudelaire