Analysis of Woak Hill

William Barnes 1801 (Bagber) – 1886



When sycamore leaves wer a-spreadèn
         Green-ruddy in hedges,
     Bezide the red doust o' the ridges,
         A-dried at Woak Hill;

I packed up my goods all a sheenèn
         Wi' long years o' handlèn,
     On dousty red wheel ov a waggon,
         To ride at Woak Hill.

The brown thatchen ruf o' the dwellèn,
       I then wer a-le{'a}vèn,
   Had shelter'd the sleek head o' Me{'a}ry,
       My bride at Woak Hill.

But now vor zome years, her light voot-vall
       'S a-lost vrom the vloorèn.
   Too soon vor my ja{'y} an' my childern,
       She died at Woak Hill.

But still I do think that, in soul,
       She do hover about us;
   To ho vor her motherless childern,
       Her pride at Woak Hill.

Zoo--lest she should tell me hereafter
       I stole off 'ithout her,
   An' left her, uncall'd at house-riddèn,
       To bide at Woak Hill--

I call'd her so fondly, wi' lippèns
       All soundless to others,
  An' took her wi' a{'i}r-reachèn hand,
       To my zide at Woak Hill.

On the road I did look round, a-talkèn
       To light at my shoulder,
   An' then led her in at the doorway,
       Miles wide vrom Woak Hill.

An' that's why vo'k thought, vor a season,
       My mind wer a-wandrèn
   Wi' sorrow, when I wer so sorely
       A-tried at Woak Hill.

But no; that my Me{'a}ry mid never
      Behold herzelf slighted,
   I wanted to think that I guided
       My guide vrom Woak Hill.


Scheme ABXC AAAC AADC CAAC XXAC DDAC BXXC ADXC XAXC DXXC
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 11011011 110010 10111010 01111 111111011 111111 1111101 11111 01111011 11100111 1100111111 11111 111110111 1011011 111111111 11111 11111101 1110011 11101001 01111 111111010 11110 110011111 11111 110110111 11110 1101011111 111111 1011111011 111110 11100101 11111 1111111010 111011 110111110 01111 1111111110 01110 110111110 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,437
Words 235
Sentences 10
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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William Barnes

William Barnes, Barne, Barneis or Berners, of Thoby, Essex, was an English politician. more…

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