Analysis of Blackmwore Maidens



THE PRIMRWOSE in the shade do blow,  
The cowslip in the zun,  
The thyme upon the down do grow,  
The clote where streams do run;  
An’ where do pretty maidens grow
An’ blow, but where the tow’r  
Do rise among the bricken tuns,  
In Blackmwore by the Stour.  

If you could zee their comely gait,  
An’ pretty faces’ smiles,
A-trippen on so light o’ waight,  
An’ steppen off the stiles;  
A-gwain to church, as bells do swing  
An’ ring ’ithin the tow’r,  
You’d own the pretty maidens’ place
Is Blackmwore by the Stour.  

If you vrom Wimborne took your road,  
To Stower or Paladore,  
An’ all the farmers’ housen show’d  
Their daughters at the door;
You’d cry to bachelors at hwome—  
“Here, come: ’ithin an hour  
You ’ll vind ten maidens to your mind,  
In Blackmwore by the Stour.”  

An’ if you look’d ’ithin their door,
To zee em in their place,  
A-doen housework up avore  
Their smilen mother’s face;  
You’d cry—“Why, if a man would wive  
An’ thrive, ’ithout a dow’r,
Then let en look en out a wife  
In Blackmwore by the Stour.”  

As I upon my road did pass  
A school-house back in May,  
There out upon the beäten grass  
Wer maïdens at their play  
An’ as the pretty souls did tweil  
An’ smile, I cried, “The flow’r  
O’ beauty, then, is still in bud  
In Blackmore by the Stour.”


Scheme ababacdC ededxcdc xcecfcxC cdcdgcgC dfdxacxc
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 0100111 010001 01010111 011111 11110101 111101 1101011 01101 11111101 110101 0111111 11101 01111111 11101 11010101 11101 1111111 11011 11010101 110101 1111011 111110 111110111 01101 1111111 111011 01111 11101 11110111 11101 11111101 01101 11011111 011101 11010111 111111 11010111 111101 11011101 010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,354
Words 238
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 185
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:11 min read
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William Barnes

William Barnes, Barne, Barneis or Berners, of Thoby, Essex, was an English politician. more…

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