Analysis of Red Lips Are Not So Red

Wilfred Owen 1893 (Oswestry) – 1918 (Sambre–Oise Canal)



Red lips are not so red
  As the stained stones kissed by the English dead.
Kindness of wooed and wooer
Seems shame to their love pure.
O Love, your eyes lose lure
  When I behold eyes blinded in my stead!

Your slender attitude
  Trembles not exquisite like limbs knife-skewed,
Rolling and rolling there
Where God seems not to care;
Till the fierce Love they bear
  Cramps them in death's extreme decrepitude.

Your voice sings not so soft, --
  Though even as wind murmuring through raftered loft, --
Your dear voice is not dear,
Gentle, and evening clear,
As theirs whom none now hear
  Now earth has stopped their piteous mouths that coughed.

Heart, you were never hot,
  Nor large, nor full like hearts made great with shot;
And though your hand be pale,
Paler are all which trail
Your cross through flame and hail:
  Weep, you may weep, for you may touch them not.


Scheme AABBBA CCBBBA XDBBBD EEFFFE
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1011110101 101101 111111 111111 1101110011 11010 111001111 100101 111111 101111 1101011 111111 11011100111 111111 100101 111111 111111111 110101 1111111111 011111 11111 111101 1111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 876
Words 156
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 168
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wilfred Owen

Wilfred Edward Salter Owen MC was an English poet and soldier, one of the leading poets of the First World War. more…

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