Analysis of Asleep

Wilfred Owen 1893 (Oswestry) – 1918 (Sambre–Oise Canal)



Under his helmet, up against his pack,
After so many days of work and waking,
Sleep took him by the brow and laid him back.

There, in the happy no-time of his sleeping,
Death took him by the heart. There heaved a quaking
Of the aborted life within him leaping,
Then chest and sleepy arms once more fell slack.

And soon the slow, stray blood came creeping
From the intruding lead, like ants on track.

Whether his deeper sleep lie shaded by the shaking
Of great wings, and the thoughts that hung the stars,
High-pillowed on calm pillows of God's making,
Above these clouds, these rains, these sleets of lead,
And these winds' scimitars,
-Or whether yet his thin and sodden head
Confuses more and more with the low mould,
His hair being one with the grey grass
Of finished fields, and wire-scrags rusty-old,
Who knows? Who hopes? Who troubles? Let it pass!
He sleeps. He sleeps less tremulous, less cold,
Than we who wake, and waking say Alas!


Scheme ABA BBBA BA BCBDCDEFEFEF
Poetic Form
Metre 1011010111 10110111010 1111010111 10010111110 11110111010 10010101110 1101011111 010111110 1001011111 1011011101010 1110011101 1111101110 0111111111 0111 1101110101 0101011011 111011011 11010101101 1111110111 1111110011 1111010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 928
Words 171
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 2, 12
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 184
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 02, 2023

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Wilfred Owen

Wilfred Edward Salter Owen MC was an English poet and soldier, one of the leading poets of the First World War. more…

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