Analysis of A Song of Failure

Arthur Henry Adams 1872 (Lawrence) – 1936 (Sydney, New South Wales)



HERE is my hand to you, brother,
 You of the ruck who have failed
 I, too, am only another
 Fighter who faltered and quailed.
 Now with my courage for token
 Here to grim Fate I give tithe;
 I, too, am beaten and broken,
 Lying, the swath of the scythe!  
  We to the conquerors' seeming
 Crouch, an incongruous horde—
 Fighters, enmeshed in their dreaming,
 Dreamers who girl on the sword,
 Weaklings with splendid ambitions,
 Heroes who learnt to succumb,
 Poets a-swoon in their visions,
 Singers with ecstasy dumb.  
  Failed! So we cast off our burden,
 Done with our doubts and our fears:
 These we have won for our guerdon—
 Pity and tears—women's tears!
 You with your conquests unending
 Dwell from a woman apart;
 Only the humble and bending
 Learn the low door to her heart.  
  We that lie dumb in your scorning
 Made you the heroes you are,

Built you a road to the morning,
 Taught you to reach for a star:
 We have had sight of the glory,
 Pointed it clear to the blind;
 Yours is the conquerors' story,
 Ours is the vision you find.  
  Here is no dread and no grieving;
 Over us hurtles the fray,
 Is yours a Heav'n worth achieving,
 If it be stormed in a day?
 Here is this world we must live in—
 Little to lose or to gain;
 More is it worth to have striven
 Than in the end to attain.


Scheme ABABCXCXDEDEFGFGCXCXDHDHDI DIJKJKDLDLXMCM
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Metre 11111110 1101111 11110010 1011001 11110110 1111111 11110010 1001101 11010010 1101001 10010110 1011101 1110010 1011101 10010110 1011001 111111010 111010101 11111101 1001101 1111010 1101001 10010010 1011101 1111011 1101011 11011010 1111101 11111010 1011101 11010010 10101011 11110110 101101 11011010 1111001 11111110 1011111 11111110 1001101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,317
Words 239
Sentences 10
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 26, 14
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 485
Words per stanza (avg) 119
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Arthur Henry Adams

Arthur Henry Adams was a journalist and author. He started his career in New Zealand, though he spent most of it in Australia, and for a short time lived in China and London.  more…

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