Analysis of Two Poems from the War

Archibald MacLeish 1892 (Glencoe) – 1982 (Boston)



Oh, not the loss of the accomplished thing!
Not dumb farewells, nor long relinquishment
Of beauty had, and golden summer spent,
And savage glory of the fluttering
Torn banners of the rain, and frosty ring
Of moon-white winters, and the imminent
Long-lunging seas, and glowing students bent
To race on some smooth beach the gull's wing:

Not these, nor all we've been, nor all we've loved,
The pitiful familiar names, had moved
Our hearts to weep for them; but oh, the star
The future is! Eternity's too wan
To give again that undefeated, far,
All-possible irradiance of dawn.

Like moon-dark, like brown water you escape,
O laughing mouth, O sweet uplifted lips.
Within the peering brain old ghosts take shape;
You flame and wither as the white foam slips
Back from the broken wave: sometimes a start,
A gesture of the hands, a way you own
Of bending that smooth head above your heart,--
Then these are varied, then the dream is gone.

Oh, you are too much mine and flesh of me
To seal upon the brain, who in the blood
Are so intense a pulse, so swift a flood
Of beauty, such unceasing instancy.
Dear unimagined brow, unvisioned face,
All beauty has become your dwelling place.


Scheme ABBAABBA BBCXCD EFEFBXBD XBBFGG
Poetic Form
Metre 1101100101 111111 1101010101 0101010100 1101010101 1111000100 1101010101 111111011 1111111111 0100010111 10111111101 0101111 110110101 1100111 1111110101 1101111001 0101011111 1101010111 1101010101 0101010111 1101110111 1111010111 1111110111 1101011001 1101011101 11010101 1010111 1101011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,179
Words 211
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 6, 8, 6
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 230
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Archibald MacLeish

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