Analysis of The Old Men In The Leaf Smoke

Archibald MacLeish 1892 (Glencoe) – 1982 (Boston)



The old men rake the yards for winter
Burning the autumn-fallen leaves.
They have no lives, the one or the other.
The leaves are dead, the old men live
Only a little, light as a leaf,
Left to themselves of all their loves:
Light in the head most often too.
Raking the leaves, raking the lives,
Raking life and leaf together,
The old men smell of burning leaves
But which is which they wonder - whether
Anyone tells the leaves and loves -
Anyone left, that is, who lives.


Scheme ABACDEFGABAEG
Poetic Form
Metre 011101110 10010101 1111011010 01110111 100101101 11011111 10011101 10011001 10101010 01111101 111111010 1010101 1011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 466
Words 91
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 365
Words per stanza (avg) 89
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 26, 2023

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Archibald MacLeish

Archibald MacLeish was an American poet, writer, and the Librarian of Congress. more…

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