Analysis of Poncé De Léon

Victor James Daley 1858 – 1905



By a black wharf I stood lately,
   When the night was at its noon;
Keen, malicious stars were shining,
   And a wicked, white-faced moon.

And I saw a stately vessel,
   Built in fashion quaint and old;
From her masthead, in the moonlight,
   Hung a flag of faded gold.

Black with age her masts and spars were,
   Black with age her ropes and rails;
Like a ghost through cere-cloths gazing
   Shone the white moon through her sails.

Not a movement stirred the stillness,
   Not a sound the silence broke,
Save alone the livid water
   Lapping round her sides of oak.

Then to her unseen commander
   Spake I, as to one I knew—
“Don Juan Poncé de Léon,
   I have waited long for you.

“Take me with you, I implore you!
   Take me with you on your quest
For the Fount of Youth Eternal,
   For the Islands of the Blest.”

Then above the bulwarks ancient
   I beheld a head arise;
And the moon with ghastly glimmer
   Lit its sad and hollow eyes.

“Grieved am I, señor, and sorry,”
   Very courteously it said,
“That I may not take you with me—
   But I only take the Dead.

“These alone may dare the voyage,
   These alone sail on the quest
For the Fount of Youth Eternal,
   For the Islands of the Blest.”


Scheme abcb dexe fgcg xhfh fixi ijDJ xkfk alal xjDJ
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 10111110 1011111 10101010 0010111 01101010 1010101 101001 1011101 11101010 1110101 10111110 1011101 10101010 1010101 10101010 1010111 11001010 1111111 111111 1110111 11111011 1111111 10111010 1010101 1010110 110101 00111010 1110101 11111010 10111 11111111 1110101 10111010 1011101 10111010 1010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,202
Words 223
Sentences 11
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 22, 2023

1:06 min read
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Victor James Daley

Victor James William Patrick Daley was an Australian poet. more…

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