Analysis of Fragments Pts 1, 11, 111



These broken lines for pardon crave;
   I cannot end the song with art:
My grief is gray and old—her grave
   Is dug so deep within my heart.

I.—Her Last Day
IT was a day of sombre heat:
The still, dense air was void of sound
And life; no wing of bird did beat
A little breeze through it—the ground
Was like live ashes to the feet.
From the black hills that loomed around
The valley many a sudden spire
Of flame shot up, and writhed, and curled,
And sank again for heaviness:
And heavy seemed to men that day
The burden of the weary world.
For evermore the sky did press
Closer upon the earth that lay
Fainting beneath, as one in dire
Dreams of the night, upon whose breast
Sits a black phantom of unrest
That holds him down. The earth and sky
Appeared unto the troubled eye
A roof of smoke, a floor of fire.

There was no water in the land.
Deep in the night of each ravine
Men, vainly searching for it, found
Dry hollows in the gaping ground,
Like sockets where clear eyes had been,
Now burnt out with a burning brand.
There was no water in the land
But the salt sea tide, that did roll
Far past the places where, till then,
The sweet streams met and flung it back;
The beds of little brooks, that stole
In spring-time down each ferny glen,
And rippled over rock and sand,
Were drier than a cattle-track.
A dull, strange languor of disease,
That ever with the heat increased,
Fell upon man, and bird, and beast;
The thin-flanked cattle gasped for breath;
The birds dropped dead from drooping trees;
And men, who drank the muddy lees
From each near-dry though deep-dug well,
Grew faint; and over all things fell
A heavy stupor, dank as Death.

Fierce Nature, glaring with a face
Of savage scorn at my despair,
Withered my heart. From cone to base
The hills were full of hollow eyes
That rayed out darkness, dead and dull;
Gray rocks grinned under ridges bare,
Like dry teeth in a mouldered skull;
And ghastly gum-tree trunks did loom
Out of black clefts and rifts of gloom,
As sheeted spectres that arise
From yawning graves at dead of night
To fill the living with affright;
And, like to witches foul that bare
Their withered arms, and bend, and cast
Dread curses on the sleeping lands
In awful legends of the past,
Red gums, with outstretched bloody hands,
Shook maledictions in the air.
Fear was around me everywhere:
The wrinkled foreheads of the rocks
Frowned on me, and methought I saw—
Deep down in dismal gulfs of awe,
Where gray death-adders have their lair,
With the fiend-bat, the flying-fox,
And dim sun-rays, down-groping far,
Pale as a dead man’s fingers are—
The grisly image of Decay,
That at the root of Life doth gnaw,
Sitting alone upon a throne
Of rotting skull and bleaching bone.

“There is an end to all our griefs:
Little the red worm of the grave
Will vex us when our days are done.”
So changed my thought: up-gazing then
On gray-piled stones that seemed the cairns
Of dead and long-forgotten chiefs—
The men of old, the poor wild men
Who, under dim lights, fought a brave,
Sad fight of Life, where hope was none,
In the vague, voiceless, far-off years—
It changed again to present pain,
And I saw Sorrow everywhere:
In blackened trees and rust-red ferns,
Blasted by bush-fires and the sun;
And by the salt-flood—salt as tears—
Where the wild apple-trees hung low,
And evermore stooped down to stare
At their drowned shadows in the wave,
Wringing their knotted hands of woe;
And the dark swamp-oaks, row on row,
Lined either bank—a sombre train
Of mourners with down-streaming hair.

II.—Sunset
THE DAY and its delights are done;
   So all delights and days expire:
Down in the dim, sad West the sun
   Is dying like a dying fire.

The fiercest lances of his light
   Are spent; I watch him droop and die
Like a great king who falls in fight;
   None dared the duel of his eye

Living, but, now his eye is dim,
The eyes of all may stare at him.

How lovely in his strength at morn
He orbed along the burning blue!
The blown gold of his flying hair
Was tangled in green-tressèd trees,
And netted in the river sand
In gleaming links of amber clear;
But all his shining locks are shorn,
His brow of its bright crown is bare,
The golden sceptre leaves his hand,
And deeper, darker, grows the hue
Of the dim purple draperies
And cloudy banners round his bier.

O beautiful, rose-hearted dawn!—


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Poetic Form
Metre 11011101 11010111 11110101 11110111 1011 1101111 01111111 01111111 01011101 11110101 10111101 010100101 11110101 010111 01011111 01010101 1100111 10010111 10011101 11010111 10110101 11110101 01100101 011101110 11110001 10011101 11010111 11000101 11011111 11110101 11110001 10111111 11010111 01110111 01110111 0111111 01010101 01010101 0111101 11010101 10110101 01110111 01111101 01110101 11111111 11010111 01010111 11010101 11011101 10111111 01011101 11110101 11110101 1110011 01011111 11110111 111101 11011111 1101011 01110111 11010101 11010101 01010101 11101101 11001 1101110 0101101 1110111 11010111 1111111 10110101 01111101 11011101 01010101 11011111 10010101 11010101 111111101 10011101 111110111 11111101 11111101 11010101 01110111 11011101 11111111 00110111 11011101 0111010 01010111 101110001 01011111 10110111 0101111 1111001 10110111 00111111 1101011 11011101 11 01010111 11010101 10011101 110101010 0101111 11111101 10111101 11010111 10111111 01111111 11001111 11010101 01111101 11001111 01000101 01011101 11110111 11111111 01010111 01010101 10110100 01010111 11001101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 4,227
Words 792
Sentences 22
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 20, 23, 30, 22, 5, 4, 2, 12, 1
Lines Amount 123
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 335
Words per stanza (avg) 79
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Victor James Daley

Victor James William Patrick Daley was an Australian poet. more…

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