Analysis of What Grandpa Mouse Said

Vachel Lindsay 1879 (Springfield) – 1931 (Springfield)



The moon’s a holy owl-queen.
She keeps them in a jar
Under her arm till evening,
Then sallies forth to war.

She pours the owls upon us.
They hoot with horrid noise
And eat the naughty mousie-girls
And wicked mousie-boys.

So climb the moonvine every night
And to the owl-queen pray:
Leave good green cheese by moonlit trees
For her to take away.

And never squeak, my children,
Nor gnaw the smoke-house door:
The owl-queen then will love us
And send her birds no more.


Scheme XXXA BCXC XDXD XABA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 0101011 111001 1001110 110111 1101011 111101 0101011 01011 11011001 010111 1111111 101101 0101110 110111 0111111 010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 461
Words 87
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 22, 2023

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Vachel Lindsay

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