Analysis of The Haughty Snail-King

Vachel Lindsay 1879 (Springfield) – 1931 (Springfield)



Twelve snails went walking after night.
They'd creep an inch or so,
Then stop and bug their eyes
And blow.
Some folks . . . are . . . deadly . . . slow.
Twelve snails went walking yestereve,
Led by their fat old king.
They were so dull their princeling had
No sceptre, robe or ring—
Only a paper cap to wear
When nightly journeying.

This king-snail said: "I feel a thought
Within. . . . It blossoms soon. . . .
O little courtiers of mine, . . .
I crave a pretty boo. . . .
Oh, yes . . . (High thoughts with effort come
And well-bred snails are ALMOST dumb.)
"I wish I had a yellow crown
As glistering . . . as . . . the moon."


Scheme XAXAAXBXBXB XCXXDDXC
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 111111 110111 01 111101 111101 111111 1011111 110111 10010111 110100 11111101 011101 11010011 110101 11111101 0111111 11110101 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 618
Words 107
Sentences 41
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 11, 8
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 220
Words per stanza (avg) 67
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Vachel Lindsay

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