Analysis of How I Walked Alone in the Jungles of Heaven

Vachel Lindsay 1879 (Springfield) – 1931 (Springfield)



Oh, once I walked in Heaven, all alone
Upon the sacred cliffs above the sky.
God and the angels, and the gleaming saints
Had journeyed out into the stars to die.

They had gone forth to win far citizens,
Bought at great price, bring happiness for all:
By such a harvest make a holier town
And put new life within old Zion's wall.

Each chose a far-off planet for his home,
Speaking of love and mercy, truth and right,
Envied and cursed, thorn-crowned and scourged in time,
Each tasted death on his appointed night.

Then resurrection day from sphere to sphere
Sped on, with all the POWERS arisen again,
While with them came in clouds recruited hosts
Of sun-born strangers and of earth-born men.

And on that day gray prophet saints went down
And poured atoning blood upon the deep,
Till every warrior of old Hell flew free
And all the torture fires were laid asleep.

And Hell's lost company I saw return
Clear-eyed, with plumes of white, the demons bold
Climbed with the angels now on Jacob's stair,
And built a better Zion than the old.

And yet I walked alone on azure cliffs
A lifetime long, and loved each untrimmed vine:
The rotted harps, the swords of rusted gold,
The jungles of all Heaven then were mine.

Oh mesas and throne-mountains that I found!
Oh strange and shaking thoughts that touched me there,
Ere I beheld the bright returning wings
That came to spoil my secret, silent lair!


Scheme XAXA XBCB XDXD XEXE CFXF XGHG XIGI XHXH
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1111010101 0101010101 1001000101 1101010111 1111111100 1111110011 11010101001 011101111 1101110111 1011010101 1001110101 1101110101 101011111 111101001001 1111010101 1111001111 0111110111 01110101 110010011111 01010100101 0111001101 1111110101 1101011101 0101010101 0111011101 01101111 0101011101 0101110101 110110111 1101011111 111010101 1111110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,366
Words 252
Sentences 11
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 07, 2023

1:16 min read
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Vachel Lindsay

Nicholas Vachel Lindsay was an American poet. more…

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