Analysis of I Wish I Was By That Dim Lake

Thomas Moore 1779 (Dublin) – 1852 (Bromham)



I wish I was by that dim Lake,
Where sinful souls their farewell take
Of this vain world, and half-way lie
In death's cold shadow, ere they die.
There, there, far from thee,
Deceitful world, my home should be;
Where, come what might of gloom and pain,
False hope should n'er deceive again.

The lifeless sky, the mournful sound
Of unseen waters falling round;
The dry leaves, quivering o'er my head,
Like man, unquiet even when dead!
These, ay, these shall wean
My soul from life's deluding scene,
And turn each thought, o'ercharged with gloom
Like willows, downward towards the tomb.

As they, who to their couch at night
Would win repose, first quench the light,
So must the hopes, that keep this breast
Awake, be quench'd, ere it can rest.
Cold, cold, this heart must grow,
Unmmoved by either joy or woe,
Like freezing founts, where all that's thrown
Within their current turns to stone.


Scheme AABBCCXX DDEEFFGG HHIIJJKK
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 1101111 11110111 0111111 11111 01011111 11111101 111100101 01010101 10110101 0111001011 1111011 11111 11110101 0111111 11100101 11111111 11011101 11011111 01111111 111111 1110111 11011111 01110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 895
Words 158
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 229
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Thomas Moore

Thomas Moore was an Irish poet singer songwriter and entertainer now best remembered for the lyrics of The Minstrel Boy and the The Last Rose of Summer more…

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