Analysis of Opifex



As I was carving images from clouds,
       And tinting them with soft ethereal dyes
       Pressed from the pulp of dreams, one comes, and cries:--
   "Forbear!" and all my heaven with gloom enshrouds.

"Forbear!" Thou hast no tools wherewith to essay
       The delicate waves of that elusive grain:
       Wouldst have due recompense of vulgar pain?
   The potter's wheel for thee, and some coarse clay!

"So work, if work thou must, O humbly skilled!
       Thou hast not known the Master; in thy soul
       His spirit moves not with a sweet control;
   Thou art outside, and art not of the guild."

Thereat I rose, and from his presence passed,
       But, going, murmured:--"To the God above,
       Who holds my heart, and knows its store of love,
   I turn from thee, thou proud iconoclast."

Then on the shore God stooped to me, and said:--
       "He spake the truth: even so the springs are set
       That move thy life, nor will they suffer let,
   Nor change their scope; else, living, thou wert dead.

"This is thy life: indulge its natural flow,
       And carve these forms. They yet may find a place
       On shelves for them reserved. In any case,
   I bid thee carve them, knowing what I know."


Scheme ABBA CDDC EFFE GHHG IJJI KLLK
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1111010011 0111101001 1101111101 101110111 111111101 01001110101 111101101 0101110111 1111111101 1111010011 1101110101 1111011101 111011101 1101010101 1111011111 11111110 1101111101 11011010111 1111111101 1111110111 11110111001 0111111101 1111010101 1111110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,221
Words 212
Sentences 13
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 141
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Thomas Edward Brown

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