Analysis of Thomas the Rhymer



True Thomas lay on Huntlie bank;   
 A ferlie he spied wi' his e'e;   
And there he saw a ladye bright   
 Come riding down by the Eildon Tree.   

Her skirt was o' the grass-green silk,           
 Her mantle o' the velvet fyne;   
At ilka tett o' her horse's mane,   
 Hung fifty siller bells and nine.   

True Thomas he pu'd aff his cap,   
 And louted low down on his knee   
'Hail to thee Mary, Queen of Heaven!   
 For thy peer on earth could never be.'   

'O no, O no, Thomas' she said,   
 'That name does not belang to me;   
I'm but the Queen o' fair Elfland,   
 That am hither come to visit thee.   

'Harp and carp, Thomas,' she said;   
 'Harp and carp along wi' me;   
And if ye dare to kiss my lips,   
 Sure of your bodie I will be.'   

'Betide me weal; betide me woe,   
 That weird shall never daunten me.'   
Syne he has kiss'd her rosy lips,   
 All underneath the Eildon Tree.   

'Now ye maun go wi' me,' she said,   
 'True Thomas, ye maun go wi' me;   
And ye maun serve me seven years,   
 Thro' weal or woe as may chance to be.'   

She 's mounted on her milk-white steed,   
 She 's ta'en true Thomas up behind;   
And aye, whene'er her bridle rang,   
 The steed gaed swifter than the wind.   

O they rade on, and farther on,   
 The steed gaed swifter than the wind;   
Until they reach'd a desert wide,   
 And living land was left behind.   

'Light down, light down now, true Thomas,   
 And lean your head upon my knee;   
Abide ye there a little space,   
 And I will show you ferlies three.   

'O see ye not yon narrow road,   
 So thick beset wi' thorns and briers?   
That is the Path of Righteousness,   
 Though after it but few inquires.   

'And see ye not yon braid, braid road,   
 That lies across the lily leven?   
That is the Path of Wickedness,   
 Though some call it the Road to Heaven.   

'And see ye not yon bonny road   
 That winds about the fernie brae?   
That is the Road to fair Elfland,   
 Where thou and I this night maun gae.   

'But, Thomas, ye sall haud your tongue,   
 Whatever ye may hear or see;   
For speak ye word in Elfyn-land,   
 Ye'll ne'er win back to your ain countrie.'   

O they rade on, and farther on,   
 And they waded rivers abune the knee;   
And they saw neither sun nor moon,   
 But they heard the roaring of the sea.   

It was mirk, mirk night, there was nae starlight,   
 They waded thro' red blude to the knee;   
For a' the blude that 's shed on the earth   
 Rins through the springs o' that countrie.   

Syne they came to a garden green,   
 And she pu'd an apple frae a tree:   
'Take this for thy wages, true Thomas;   
 It will give thee the tongue that can never lee.'   

'My tongue is my ain,' true Thomas he said;   
 'A gudely gift ye wad gie to me!   
I neither dought to buy or sell   
 At fair or tryst where I might be.   

'I dought neither speak to prince or peer,   
 Nor ask of grace from fair ladye!'—   
'Now haud thy peace, Thomas,' she said,   
 'For as I say, so must it be.'   

He has gotten a coat of the even cloth,   
 And a pair o' shoon of the velvet green;   
And till seven years were gane and past,   
 True Thomas on earth was never seen.


Scheme xaba xccc xaca daba daea xaea daxa xfxF CFxf gaxa hegx hcgc hibx xaxi Caca baxi caga daxa xxda xcxc
Poetic Form Quatrain  (70%)
Etheree  (26%)
Metre 1101111 01111111 0111011 11011011 01110111 01010101 110110101 11010101 11011111 0111111 111101110 111111101 11111011 1111111 1101111 111011101 1011011 1010111 01111111 11110111 01110111 1111011 11110101 101011 11111111 11011111 01111101 111111111 111010111 1111110101 0110101 01110101 11110101 01110101 01110101 01011101 11111110 01110111 01110101 0111111 11111101 11011101 11011100 110111010 01111111 110101010 11011100 111101110 01111101 1101011 1101111 11011111 11011111 1011111 1111011 11111111 11110101 011010101 01110111 111010101 111111111 110111101 1001111101 1101111 11110101 011110101 111110110 11110111101 1111111011 01111111 11011111 11111111 111011111 1111111 11111011 11111111 11100110101 0011110101 011010101 110111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 3,107
Words 585
Sentences 28
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 80
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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