Analysis of As banked clouds

Saigyo 1118 (Kyoto) – 1190



As banked clouds
are swept apart by the wind,
at dawn the sudden cry
of the first wild geese
winging across the mountains.


Scheme ABCDE
Poetic Form Tanka  (60%)
Tetractys  (40%)
Cinquain  (40%)
Metre 111 1101101 110101 10111 1001010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 126
Words 25
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Saigyo

Saigyō Hōshi was a famous Japanese poet of the late Heian and early Kamakura period. more…

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