Analysis of Ch 05 On Love And Youth Story 10

Sa di 1210 (Shiraz) – 1291 (Shiraz)



In the exuberance of youth, as it usually happens and as thou knowest, I was on the closest terms of intimacy with a sweetheart who had a melodious voice and a form beautiful like the moon just rising.

He, the down of whose cheek drinks the water of immortality,  
        Whoever looks at his sugar lips eats sweetmeats.  

I happened to notice something in his behaviour which was contrary to nature and not approved of by me. Accordingly I gathered up my skirt from him and, picking up the pieces of the chess-game of friendship, recited:

‘Go and do as thou listest.  
        Thou hast not our head; follow thine.’  
        I heard him saying when he went away:
       ‘If the bat desires not union with the sun  
        The beauty of the sun will not decrease.’  
        Saying this, he departed and his distress took effect on me:
        I lost the time of union and man is ignorant  
        Of the value of delightful life before adversity.  
        Return. Slay me. For to die in thy presence  
        Is more sweet than to live after thee.  

Thanks be to the bounty of God, he returned some time afterwards but his melodious voice had changed, his Joseph like beauty had faded, on the apple of his skin dust had settled as upon a quince so that the splendour of his beauty had departed. He wanted me to embrace him. I complied and said:

‘On the day when thou hadst a beauteous incipient beard  
       Thou drovest him, who desired the sight, from thy sight.  
       Today thou camest to make peace with him  
       But hast exhibited Fathah and Zammah.  
       His fresh spring is gone and he has become yellow.  
       Bring not the kettle because our fire is extinguished.  
       How long wilt thou strut about, showing arrogance,  
       Imagining felicity which has elapsed?  
       Go to him who will purchase thee.  
       Coquet with him who asks for thee.  
       They said: “Verdure in the garden is pleasing.”  
       He knows it who utters these words.  
       Namely, heartfelt affection for that green line  
       Fascinates the hearts of lovers more and more.  
       Thy garden is a bed of leeks.  
       The more thou weedest it the more they grow.  
       Whether thou pluckest out thy beard or not  
       This happiness of youthful days must end.  
       Had I the power of life as thou of the beard  
       I would not let it end till resurrection-day.  
       I asked and said: What has befallen the beauty of thy face  
       That ants are crawling round the moon?  
       He replied, smiling: “I know not what is the matter with my face.  
       Perhaps it wears black as mourning for my beauty.”’


Scheme A BC X BDEXCBXBCB X FXGGHXCXBBACDXCHXXFECXCB
Poetic Form
Metre 0001001111100010011111101011100010111001001001100101110 101111101010100 01011110111 1101101001111100110010111101001101111101010101011110010 101111 111101101 1111011101 101010110101 0101011101 1011010010110111 1101110011100 101010101010100 01111110110 111111101 111010111011110011010011111011011010101111110101011101111010101101101110101 1011110101001 111101001111 011111111 110100101 111110110110 110100110101010 111110110100 010001001101 11111101 1111111 1110010110 11111011 1010101111 1001110101 11010111 011110111 101111111 1100110111 110101111101 11111110101 110111010010111 11110101 1011011111010111 011111101110
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 2,671
Words 442
Sentences 30
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 1, 10, 1, 24
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 309
Words per stanza (avg) 73
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:12 min read
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