Analysis of The Greater Love

Roderic Quinn 1867 (Surry Hills, New South Wales) – 1949 (Darlinghurst, New South Wales)



ONCE upon a time,
Little Golden-Head,
Steeples used to chime,
And their chiming said:
'Peace is in the land —
Joy on every hand.'
Glowing youths and men
Rose and went their ways,
Some to hill and glen,
Some to shining bays.
And they left behind
Ills of heart and mind.
Oh, but it was sweet
Underneath the trees,
Bare of throat and feet,
Bathed in golden ease,
Two and two to lie
While the hours went by!
Sweet indeed it was
Thus to lie and laze,
Couched upon the grass
Through the shining days —
Sweet to breathe the air,
Free of toil and care!
On the beaches then,
Sporting with the sea,
Gathered brown-limbed men
Graced like statuary
Chiselled by some bold
Master hand of old.
All were guests of Joy;
All his sportive clan —
Here a shouting boy,
There a jesting man,
While the breakers hymned,
Braving them, stout-limbed.
Listen, Golden-Head!
Came a Wondrous One
Unto each, and said:
'Look on me, my son!
Am I not above
All things else you love?'
Then that love began
Which is more than life —
More than love of man,
Love of maid or wife;
Love of queen or king,
Aught or anything.
Little Golden-Head,
Is it well to tell
How they wrought and bled,
How they fought and fell
In their glowing prime,
Once upon a time?
Nay, but it is writ
That such things must be;
Oh the shame of it,
Oh the tragedy!
Oh the days of rue,
Oh the glory, too!
Little Golden-Head,
By the skies above,
By our honoured dead,
You shall know that love —
Know, and hold the time
When 'twas born sublime!


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Poetic Form
Metre 10101 10101 10111 0111 11001 111001 10101 10111 11101 11101 01101 11101 11111 0101 11101 10101 10111 101011 10111 11101 10101 10101 11101 11101 10101 10101 10111 11100 1111 10111 10111 1111 10101 1011 10101 10111 10101 10101 10101 11111 11101 11111 11101 11111 11111 11111 11111 1110 10101 11111 11101 11101 01101 10101 11111 11111 10111 10100 10111 10101 10101 10101 11011 11111 10101 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,427
Words 286
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 66
Lines Amount 66
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,124
Words per stanza (avg) 282
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Roderic Quinn

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