Analysis of The Camp Within the West

Roderic Quinn 1867 (Surry Hills, New South Wales) – 1949 (Darlinghurst, New South Wales)



O DID you see a troop go by   
 Way-weary and oppressed,   
Dead kisses on the drooping lip   
And a dead heart in the breast?   

Yea, I have seen them one by one           
Way-weary and oppressed,   
And when I asked them, ‘Whither speed?’   
They answered, ‘To the West!’   

And were they pale as pale could be—   
Death-pale with haunted eyes,           
And did you see the hot white dust   
Range round their feet and rise?   

Oh, they were pale as pale could be,   
And pale as an embered leaf;   
The hot white dust had risen, but           
They laid it with their grief.   

Did no one say the way is long,   
And crave a little rest?   
Oh no, they said, ‘The night is nigh,   
Our camp is in the West!’           

And did pain pierce their feet, as though   
The way with thorns were set,   
And were they visited by strange   
Dark angels of regret?   

Oh yea, and some were mute as death,           
Though shot by many a dart,   
With them the salt of inward tears   
Went stinging through the heart.   

And how are these wayfarers called,   
And whither do they wend?           
The Weary-Hearted—and their road   
At sunset hath and end.   

Shed tears for them…Nay, nay, no tears!   
They yearn for endless rest;   
Perhaps large stars will burn above           
Their camp within the West.


Scheme aBxb xBxb cdxd cexe xbab xfxf xghg xixi hbxb
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11110111 110001 11010101 0011001 11111111 110001 01111101 110101 00111111 111101 01110111 111101 11011111 011111 01111101 111111 11110111 010101 11110111 1011001 01111111 011101 00110011 110101 11010111 1111001 11011101 110101 011111 010111 01010011 11101 11111111 111101 01111101 110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,313
Words 225
Sentences 14
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Roderic Quinn

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