Analysis of Stars in the Sea

Roderic Quinn 1867 (Surry Hills, New South Wales) – 1949 (Darlinghurst, New South Wales)



I took a boat on a starry night
and went for a row on the water,
and she danced like a child on a wake of light
and bowed where the ripples caught her.

I vowed, as I rowed on the velvet blue
through the night and the starry spendour
to woo and sue a maiden I know
till she bent to my pleading tender.

My painted boat she was light and glad
and gladder my heart was wishing,
and I came in time to a little lad
who stood on the rocks a-fishing.

I said "Ahoy!" and he said "Ahoy"!
and I asked how the fish were biting;
And what are you trying to catch my boy,
Bream, silver and red - or Whiting?"

"Neither", he answered, "the seaweed mars
my line, and the sharp shells sunder;
I am trying my luck wth those great big stars
down there in the round skies under".

"Goodbye!" from him and "Goodbye!" from me,
and never a laugh came after;
So many fishing for stars in the sea
that it's hardly a subject for laughter


Scheme ABAB XBXB CDCD EDED FBFB GBGB
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 110110101 011011010 01110110111 01101010 1111110101 10100101 110101011 111111010 110111101 0111110 0110110101 11101010 110101101 011101010 0111101111 11001110 10110011 11001110 11101111111 11001110 1110111 01001110 1101011001 1110001110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 916
Words 189
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Roderic Quinn

Roderic Joseph Quinn was an Australian poet. more…

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