Analysis of An Empty Room

Roderic Quinn 1867 (Surry Hills, New South Wales) – 1949 (Darlinghurst, New South Wales)



'THIS is the room where Pinksie died';
So runs the writing there on the wall.
The world outside is a golden tide
Of light, but here the shadows fall.
And who was Pinksie — a babe or wife?
A girl, I think, in her laughing teens,
Who passed away from the feast of life
When boys and girls are kings and queens.
I like to think that she laughed at whiles,
Her eyes alight with the imps of fun,
And knew no sorrow but such as smiles
The moment after the hurt is done.
They named her Pinksie, I have no doubt,
Because of the rich, soft blush she wore;
The roses paled ere they bore her out,
A slim child-figure, through yonder door.
She passed in the joy of her early bloom
To wide, dark realms where no planets roll.
And I write these lines in the empty room
Where Pinksie died. God rest her soul!


Scheme ABABCDCDEFEFGHGHIJIJ
Poetic Form Traditional rhyme
Metre 1101111 110101101 011110101 1111011 01110111 011100101 110110111 11011101 111111111 010110111 011101111 010100111 11011111 011011111 010111101 011101101 1100110101 111111101 0111100101 1111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 784
Words 159
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 610
Words per stanza (avg) 157
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Roderic Quinn

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