Analysis of The Loving Shepherdess

Robinson Jeffers 1887 (Allegheny) – 1962 (Carmel-by-the-Sea)



The little one-room schoolhousc among the redwoods

Opened its door, a dozen children ran out

And saw on the narrow road between the dense trees

A persona girl by the long light-colored hair:

The torn brown cloak that she wore might be a man's

Or woman's eitherwalking hastily northward

Among a huddle of sheep. Her thin young face

Seemed joyful, and lighted from inside, and formed

Too finely to be so wind-burnt. As she went forward

One or another of the trotting sheep would turn

Its head to look at her face, and one would press

Its matted shoulder against her moving thigh.

The schoolchildren stood laughing and shouting together.

'Who's that? ' 'Clare Walker,' they said, 'down from the hill.

She'd fifty sheep and now she's got eight, nine,

Ten: what have you done with all the others, Clare Walker? '

The joy that had lived in her face died, she yet

Went on as if she were deaf, with forward eyes

And lifted head, but the delicate lips moving.

The jeering children ran in behind her, and the sheep

Drew nervously on before, except the old ram,

That close at her side dipped his coiled horns a little

But neither looked back nor edged forward. An urchin shouted

'You killed your daddy, why don't you kill your sheep? '

And a fat girl, 'Oh where's your lover, Clare Walker?

He didn't want you after all.'

The patriarch ram

That walked beside her wore a greasy brown bundle
Tied on his back with cords in the felt of wool,
And one of the little boys, running by, snatched at it
So that it fell. Clare bent to gather it fallen,
And tears dropped from her eyes. She offered no threat
With the bent staff of rosy-barked madrone-wood

That lay in her hand, but said 'Oh please, Oh please,'

As meek as one of her ewes. An eight-year-old girl

Shrilled, 'Whistle for the dogs, make her run like a cat,

Call your dog, Charlie Geary! ' But a brown-skinned

Spanish-Indian boy came forward and said,

'You let her alone. They'll not hurt you, Clare Walker.

Don't cry, I'll walk beside you.' She thanked him, still crying.

Four of the children, who lived southward, turned back;

The rest followed more quietly.

The black-haired boy

Said gently, 'Remember to keep in the road, Clare Walker.
There's enough grass. The ranchers will sick their dogs on you
If you go into the pastures, because their cows
Won't eat where the sheep have passed; but you can walk
Into the woods.' She answered, 'You're kind, you're kind.
Oh yes, I always remember.' The small road dipped
Under the river when they'd come down the hill,
A shallow mountain river that Clare skipped over
By stone after stone, the sheep wading beside her.
The friendly boy went south to the farm on the hill, 'good-by,

good-by,' and Clare with her little flock
Kept northward among great trees like towers in the river- valley.

Her sheep sidled the path, snifHng
The bitter sorrel, lavender-flowering in shade, and the withered

ferns. Toward evening they found a hollow
Of autumn grass.

Clare laughed and was glad, she undid the bundle

from the ram's back
And found in the folds a battered metal cup and a broken loaf.

She shared her bread with the sheep,
A morsel for each, and prettily laughing
Pushed down the reaching faces. 'Piggies, eat grass. Leave me the

crust, Tiny, I can't eat grass.
Nosie, keep off. Here Frannie, here Frannie.' One of the ewes

came close and stood to be milked, Clare stroked

The little udders and drank when the cup filled, and filled it again

and drank, dividing her crust
With the milch ewe; the flock wandered the glade, nibbling white

grass. There was only one lamb among them,
The others had died in the spring storm.

The light in the glade

suddenly increased and changed, the hill
High eastward began to shine and be rosy-colored, and bathed

in so clear a light that up the bare hill
Each clump of yucca stood like a star, bristling sharp rays; while

westward the spires of the giant wood
Were strangely tall and intensely dark on the layered colors of

the winter sundown; their blunt points touched
The high tender blue, their heads were backed by the amber, the

Crossed flaming rose. Then Clare with the flush
Of the solemn


Scheme X X A X X B X X B X X C D E X D F X G H I J X H D X I JXXXFK A X X X X D G L M X DXXXXXEDDC XM GB XN J LX HGO NX X X XX XX X EX EX KX XO XX
Poetic Form
Metre 0101110101 10110101011 011010101011 001011011101 01111111101 110110010 01010110111 11001010101 1101111111110 110101010111 11111010111 1110010101 010110010010 11110111101 1101011111 1111111010110 01111001111 11111011101 010110100110 0101010010001 110010101011 111011111010 11011111011010 11110111111 001111110110 11011101 0101 110101010110 11111100111 0110101101111 111111110110 01110111011 1011110111 11001111111 111110111111 110101101101 11110101011 10100111001 110011111110 1111011111110 11010111011 01101100 0111 11001011001110 1011010111111 111010100111 11101111111 01011101111 11110100111 10010111101 010101011110 111010110010 01011110110111 110110101 1100111110001010 0110011 01010100100010010 1011011010 1101 11011101010 1011 0100101010100101 1101101 010110110 1101010111110 1101111 1111101101101 110111111 010101101101101 0101001 10110110011001 1111011011 010110011 01001 100010101 110011101101001 0110111011 111101101100111 100110101 0101001011010101 01011111 01101110110100 110111101 1010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 4,136
Words 747
Sentences 40
Stanzas 56
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 6, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 10, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 84
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 13
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

3:46 min read
316

Robinson Jeffers

John Robinson Jeffers was an American poet, known for his work about the central California coast. more…

All Robinson Jeffers poems | Robinson Jeffers Books

2 fans

Discuss this Robinson Jeffers poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "The Loving Shepherdess" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 29 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/32880/the-loving-shepherdess>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    1
    day
    2
    hours
    56
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    A haiku has ________ lines.
    A 4
    B 5
    C 3
    D 2