Analysis of When I'm Killed

Robert Graves 1895 (Wimbledon) – 1985 (Deià)



When I’m killed, don’t think of me
Buried there in Cambrin Wood,
Nor as in Zion think of me
With the Intolerable Good.
And there’s one thing that I know well,
I’m damned if I’ll be damned to Hell!

So when I’m killed, don’t wait for me,
Walking the dim corridor;
In Heaven or Hell, don’t wait for me,
Or you must wait for evermore.
You’ll find me buried, living-dead
In these verses that you’ve read.

So when I’m killed, don’t mourn for me,
Shot, poor lad, so bold and young,
Killed and gone — don’t mourn for me.
On your lips my life is hung:
O friends and lovers, you can save
Your playfellow from the grave.


Scheme ABABCC AXAXDD AEAEFF
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 101011 11010111 10010001 01111111 11111111 11111111 1001100 010111111 1111110 11110101 0110111 11111111 1111101 1011111 1111111 11010111 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 628
Words 120
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 30, 2023

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Robert Graves

Robert von Ranke Graves was an English poet, scholar/translator/writer of antiquity specializing in Classical Greece and Rome, novelist and soldier in World War One. more…

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