Analysis of Smoke-Rings

Robert Graves 1895 (Wimbledon) – 1985 (Deià)



Most venerable and learned sir,
Tall and true Philosopher,
These rings of smoke you blow all day
With such deep thought, what sense have they?

Small friend, with prayer and meditation
I make an image of Creation.
And if your mind is working nimble
Straightway you’ll recognize a symbol
Of the endless and eternal ring
Of God, who girdles everything—
God, who in His own form and plan
Moulds the fugitive life of man.
These vaporous toys you watch me make,
That shoot ahead, pause, turn and break—
Some glide far out like sailing ships,
Some weak ones fail me at my lips.
He who ringed His awe in smoke,
When He led forth His captive folk,
In like manner, East, West, North, and South,
Blows us ring-wise from His mouth.


Scheme AABB CCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJ
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11000011 1010100 11111111 11111111 11110010 111101010 011111010 1110010 101000101 111110 11011101 10100111 1111111 11011101 11111101 11111111 1111101 11111101 011011101 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 748
Words 135
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 16
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 282
Words per stanza (avg) 66
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 24, 2023

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Robert Graves

Robert von Ranke Graves was an English poet, scholar/translator/writer of antiquity specializing in Classical Greece and Rome, novelist and soldier in World War One. more…

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