Analysis of What Fields Are As Fragrant As Your Hands?

Rainer Maria Rilke 1875 (Prague) – 1926 (Montreux)



What fields are as fragrant as your hands?
You feel how external fragrance stands
upon your stronger resistance.
Stars stand in images above.
Give me your mouth to soften, love;
ah, your hair is all in idleness.

See, I want to surround you with yourself
and the faded expectation lift
from the edges of your eyebrows;
I want, as with inner eyelids sheer,
to close for you all places which appear
by my tender caresses now.

Translated by John J.L. Mood


Scheme AAXBBX XXXCCX X
Poetic Form
Metre 111110111 111010101 01110010 11010001 11111101 111110100 1111011101 00100101 1010111 11111011 1111110101 11100101 0101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 447
Words 84
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Rainer Maria Rilke

René Karl Wilhelm Johann Josef Maria Rilke — better known as Rainer Maria Rilke — was a Bohemian-Austrian poet and novelist, "widely recognized as one of the most lyrically intense German-language poets", writing in both verse and highly lyrical prose. more…

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