Analysis of To Say Before Going to Sleep

Rainer Maria Rilke 1875 (Prague) – 1926 (Montreux)



I would like to sing someone to sleep,
have someone to sit by and be with.
I would like to cradle you and softly sing,
be your companion while you sleep or wake.
I would like to be the only person
in the house who knew: the night outside was cold.
And would like to listen to you
and outside to the world and to the woods.

The clocks are striking, calling to each other,
and one can see right to the edge of time.
Outside the house a strange man is afoot
and a strange dog barks, wakened from his sleep.
Beyond that there is silence.

My eyes rest upon your face wide-open;
and they hold you gently, letting you go
when something in the dark begins to move.


Scheme AXXXBXXX XXXAX BXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 11111011 11111010101 1101011111 1111101010 00111011111 01111011 0111010101 01110101110 0111110111 1101011101 001111111 0111110 1110111110 0111101011 1100010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 649
Words 132
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 5, 3
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 170
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 26, 2023

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Rainer Maria Rilke

René Karl Wilhelm Johann Josef Maria Rilke — better known as Rainer Maria Rilke — was a Bohemian-Austrian poet and novelist, "widely recognized as one of the most lyrically intense German-language poets", writing in both verse and highly lyrical prose. more…

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