Analysis of Slumber Song

Rainer Maria Rilke 1875 (Prague) – 1926 (Montreux)



Some day, if I should ever lose you,
will you be able then to go to sleep
without me softly whispering above you
like night air stirring in the linden tree?

Without my waking here and watching
and saying words as tender as eyelids
that come to rest weightlessly upon your breast,
upon your sleeping limbs, upon your lips?

Without my touching you and leaving you
alone with what is yours, like a summer garden
that is overflowing with masses
of melissa and star-anise?

Translated by Albert Ernest Flemming


Scheme AXAX BXXX AXXX B
Poetic Form
Metre 111111011 1111011111 01110100011 1111000101 011101010 010111011 111110111 0111010111 0111010101 011111101010 11100110 10100110 0101101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 500
Words 91
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Rainer Maria Rilke

René Karl Wilhelm Johann Josef Maria Rilke — better known as Rainer Maria Rilke — was a Bohemian-Austrian poet and novelist, "widely recognized as one of the most lyrically intense German-language poets", writing in both verse and highly lyrical prose. more…

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