Analysis of Going Blind

Rainer Maria Rilke 1875 (Prague) – 1926 (Montreux)



She sat just like the others at the table.
But on second glance, she seemed to hold her cup
a little differently as she picked it up.
She smiled once. It was almost painful.

And when they finished and it was time to stand
and slowly, as chance selected them, they left
and moved through many rooms (they talked and laughed),
I saw her. She was moving far behind

the others, absorbed, like someone who will soon
have to sing before a large assembly;
upon her eyes, which were radiant with joy,
light played as on the surface of a pool.

She followed slowly, taking a long time,
as though there were some obstacle in the way;
and yet: as though, once it was overcome,
she would be beyond all walking, and would fly.


Scheme ABBA XXXX XXXX XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 11110101010 11101111101 01010011111 11111110 01110011111 01011010111 0111011101 1101110101 0100111111 1110101010 01011010011 1111010101 1101010011 11101100001 011111110 11101110011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 705
Words 136
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 24, 2023

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Rainer Maria Rilke

René Karl Wilhelm Johann Josef Maria Rilke — better known as Rainer Maria Rilke — was a Bohemian-Austrian poet and novelist, "widely recognized as one of the most lyrically intense German-language poets", writing in both verse and highly lyrical prose. more…

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