Analysis of The Gardener XXXVIII: My Love, Once upon a Time

Rabindranath Tagore 1861 (Kolkata) – 1941 (Kolkata)



My love, once upon a time your poet
launched a great epic in his mind.
    Alas, I was not careful, and it struck
your ringing anklets and came to
grief.
    It broke up into scraps of songs and
lay scattered at your feet.
    All  my cargo of the stories of old
wars was tossed by the laughing waves
and soaked in tears and sank.
    You must make this loss good to me,
my love.
    If my claims to immortal fame after
death are scattered, make me immortal
while I live.
    And I will not mourn for my loss nor
blame you.


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 515
Words 103
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 386
Words per stanza (avg) 102
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rabindranath Tagore

Rabindranath Tagore FRAS was an Indian polymath—poet, writer, playwright, composer, philosopher, social reformer and painter. He reshaped Bengali literature and music as well as Indian art with Contextual Modernism in the late 19th and early 20th centuries. more…

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