Analysis of Quis Separabit?



All my life's short years had been stern and sterile --
   I stood like one whom the blasts blow back --
As with shipmen whirled through the straits of Peril,
   So fierce foes menaced my every track.

But I steeled my soul to a strong endeavour,
   I bared my brow as the sharp strokes fell,
And I said to my heart -- "Hope on! Hope ever:
   Have Courage -- Courage, and all is well."

Then, bright as the blood in my heart's rich chalice,
   O Blossom, Blossom! -- you came from far;
And life rang joy, till the World's loud malice
   Shrilled to the edge of our utmost star.

And I said: "On me let the rough storms hurtle,
   The great clouds gather and shroud my sun --
But you shall be Queen where the rose and myrtle
   Laugh with the year till the year is done."

So my Dream fell dead; and the fluctuant passion --
   The stress and strain of the past re-grew,
The world laughed on in its heedless fashion,
   But Earth whirled worthless, because of you!

In that Lake of Tears which my grief discovered,
   I laid dead Love with a passionate kiss,
And over those soundless depths has hovered
   The sweet, sad wraith of my vanished bliss.

Heart clings to Heart -- let the strange years sever
   The fates of two who had met -- to part;
Love's strength survives, and the harsh world never
   Shall crush the passion of heart for heart;

For I know my life, though it droop and dwindle,
   Shall leave me Love till I fade and die,
And when hereafter our Souls re-kindle,
   Who shall be fonder -- You or I?


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFXF AGAG GHGH IEIE CJCJ AKAK
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11111111010 111110111 1111101110 1111011001 11111101010 111110111 01111111110 110100111 11101011110 110101111 0111101110 110111011 01111101110 011100111 11111101010 110110111 1111100110 010110111 011101110 111100111 01111111010 1111101001 010111110 011111101 1111101110 011111111 1101001110 110101111 11111111010 111111101 01010101110 11110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,516
Words 285
Sentences 10
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:26 min read
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Philip Joseph Holdsworth

Philip Joseph Holdsworth was a poet and public servant in colonial New South Wales.  more…

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