Analysis of Keep Up Your Promise

Mirabai 1498 (Kudki, Pali district, Jodhpur State) – 1556 (Dwaraka)



Take my arm
and keep up your promise!
They call you the refugeless refuge,
they call you redeemer of outcasts.
Caught in a riptide
in the sea of becoming,
without your support I'm a shipwreck!
You reveal yourself age after age
and free the beggar
from her affliction.

Dark One, Mira is clutching your feet,
at stake is your honor!   


Scheme XXXXAXXXBX AB
Poetic Form
Metre 111 011110 1110110 111111 1001 0011010 011011010 101011101 01010 10010 111011011 111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 340
Words 62
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Mirabai

Mirabai was a 16th-century Hindu mystic poet and devotee of Lord Krishna. more…

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