Analysis of It's True I Went To The Market

Mirabai 1498 (Kudki, Pali district, Jodhpur State) – 1556 (Dwaraka)



My friend, I went to the market and bought the Dark One.
You claim by night, I claim by day.
Actually I was beating a drum all the time I was buying him.
You say I gave too much; I say too little.
Actually, I put him on a scale before I bought him.
What I paid was my social body, my town body, my family body, and all my inherited jewels.
Mirabai says: The Dark One is my husband now.
Be with me when I lie down; you promised me this in an earlier life.

[Translated by Robert Bly]


Scheme XXAXAXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101001011 11111111 10011100110111101 11111111110 10011110101111 1111110101110110010011010010 1101111101 111111111011011001 0101101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 481
Words 102
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 183
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mirabai

Mirabai was a 16th-century Hindu mystic poet and devotee of Lord Krishna. more…

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