Analysis of Friend, without that Dark raptor

Mirabai 1498 (Kudki, Pali district, Jodhpur State) – 1556 (Dwaraka)



Friend, without that Dark raptor
I could not survive.
Mother-in-law shrills at me,
her daughter sneers,
the prince stumbles about in a permanent fury.
Now they've bolted my door
and mounted a guard.
But who could abandon a love
developed through uncounted lifetimes?
The Dark One is Mirabai's lord,
who else could
     slake her desire?

[Translated by Andrew Schelling]


Scheme AXBXBXXXXXXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 1011110 11101 1001111 0101 0110010010010 111011 01001 11101001 0101101 011111 111 10010 01011010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 365
Words 61
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 147
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mirabai

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