Analysis of Tanka 11

Masaoki Shiki 1867 (Matsuyama, Ehime) – 1902 (Tokyo)



I remember plucking
buds of bush clover
long ago with
Satsuma geta on my feet and
a walking stick in my hand


Scheme ABCDE
Poetic Form Tanka  (60%)
Cinquain  (40%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 101010 11110 1011 111110 0101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 112
Words 24
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Masaoki Shiki

Masaoka Shiki, pen-name of Masaoka Noboru was a Japanese poet, author, and literary critic in Meiji period Japan. more…

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