Analysis of When my love did what I would not, what I would not



When my love did what I would not, what I would not,
   I could hear his merry voice upon the wind,
Crying, "e;Fairest, shut your eyes, for see you should not.
      Love is blind!"

When my love said what I say not, what I say not,
   With a joyous laugh he quieted my fears,
Whispering, "Fairest, hearken not, for hear you may not.
      Hath Love ears?"

When my love said, "Will you longer let me seek it?
   Blind and deaf is she that doth not bid me come!"
All my heart said murmuring, "Dearest, can I speak it?
      Love is dumb!


Scheme ABAB ACAC DEDE
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 111111111111 11111010101 10111111111 111 111111111111 10101110011 100101111111 111 111111101111 10111111111 1111100101111 111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 543
Words 107
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mary Elizabeth Coleridge

Mary Elizabeth Coleridge was a British novelist and poet who also wrote essays and reviews. more…

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